Wednesday, June 07, 2006

I got back home from a KG dinner last night.A send-off-for-ten-days party.After a quick phone call, I was almost falling asleep.And the messaging started.

Me:
Never did the seas turn blue nor her looks did wither to the dust beneath his feet

Him:
Tis for her he lives
His life she gives
Commanding with one breath
He'll not wait
Nor hesitate
If even it means death

Me:
The blood trickled down her thigh
A single line
Making its way down to her ankle.
He laughed
She trembled
She was his

Him:
She was never his to take
She was never his to break
And yet she gave all in
This better be love
All doubts above
Else she'll burn in sin

Me:
And Death played along
Teasing,biting,nibbling
Till He couldn't hold back
And took her whole
My dear departed

Him:
To rid of which cannot occur
He who denies is a liar
Make no mistake in mind or physical state
Where there are ashes were once a fire

Me:
She never could hear
He never did see
But she saw the fear
And he heard the screams
Until they walked away

Him:
Arm in arm
Or in opposite ways
The path, its still not clear
They walked away
Is what they say
But what is said one cannot hear


Me:
She cried to sleep
He tossed and turned
The little girl came to haunt them
Choose not a blind eye or a deaf ear
Throw my ashes into the sea

Him:
The clocks past one o pretty one
The windows of my vision are half closed
I take leave of thee
Have pity on me
Let my nights grave be rosed

He's the boy who's a poet in the making.
And I'm the girl who should fall asleep when she's supposed to and stick with Biotechnology.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

funny!!hahahaha

Ganesh Ranganathan said...

you guys sure have a lot of patience typing so many long messages on your phone...I hardly type more than 30 chars that too in slang

Zaradin said...

@ chewbacca-manu?

@ ganesh-lol..not commenting on the wonderful poetry?

Da Rodent said...

hmm... I'm clueless...

hmmmmmmmmmmmm..............

Anonymous said...

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Su said...

Awesome poetry. Awesome. Had me wondering if it was about a couple making love or a woman and abortion ? His poetry was da awesome. Whoever it is , KUDOS.
You'rs waws pretty good too

Zaradin said...

@ da rodent-same here

@ anonymous-i'm perhaps thinking the same

@ paranoia-whats waws

Rambling Man said...
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Rambling Man said...

haha!!! what a load of rot!!!

hows btful malaysia ?!? my reagards to the chinks ... started gre classes , asked bout the fees also .. its 6000 for a 2- 3 months course n these guys r pretty good.

Anonymous said...

That is some deep deep stuff.... simply awesome.......totally spell bound by the seemingly effortless flurry of words........AMAZING!!!

Yasser Rahman said...

god amazing poetry! Brought back old memories...lying down there, tiered, wanting to sleep.. but I had to write..i had to sing..cause I was in love...and the distance would only let me express my love through words...

Zaradin said...

@ rambling man-you are apparently the only one who does not appreciate this shaanky boy

@ guffawer-i'm surprised

@ yasser- danke danke danke

@ ppp-it was only my second attempt at it and i still think its ridiculously funny rather than deep.sleep does weird things to the brain